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@@ -5,33 +5,40 @@ date: 2024-02-18
author: Jennifer C J Radtke
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# Amos' straw tax updated
-O, my people, hear the sorrow of the Holy One
+O, my people, hear the sorrow of the Holy One
“Divided and in denial
with one set against the other
In the midst of your slow motion destruction
There is no one to call out ‘enough’”
-Hear the judgement of She who is Wisdom
+Hear the judgement of She who is Wisdom
“Your piles of wealth, they will not save you
In those days, hate will be turned back to you
And those who have taken mother from child
will know what it is to mourn”
-This is what Mighty God says
+This is what Mighty God says
“Seek me and live
don’t put your hope in AGI
don’t scroll your feed forever
for AGI will not save you
and you know your feed does not have the answer
- Seek the God who saves
+ Seek the God who saves
or your society will be set to ruin
divided against itself, destruction will reign
and there will be no one left to put things right
- The Lord your God breathed life into you
+ The Lord your God breathed life into you
life and intelligence for all living beings
He set the electrons in their places
and wrote the rules by which they move amongst the atoms
@@ -55,9 +62,9 @@ This is what Mighty God says
These are the days when evil is done in plain sight
Seek good and not evil, for that is the way to life
- She who is holy will walk with you
+ She who is holy will walk with you
Return justice to the courts and set out on the path to ending oppression
- She who saves may redeem you then
+ She who saves may redeem you then
_Styled after Amos 5:1-15_